
Finished Word Count: 28,546 words
Written: School year of 2008 and 2009
Revised: Summer of 2009, fall of 2010
Genre: Fantasy
The synopsis:
Cilla’s mother is kidnapped. Her father is gone. Her country is at near rebellion. The war-lord Clambus is on the brink of capturing Raeltha’s throne. Cilla sets out to save her mother, and is given a choice. Rescue Isolde, or try to save Raeltha? Is freedom worth suffering for?
The main characters:
- Placilla “Cilla” Garensdaughter (heroine)
- Clambus Taykkenson (villain)
- Tirza of Koahl (mentor)
- Aidan Clambuson (ally)
The story clip:
“No!” I stood up and darted into the tunnel that Rowan and James had gone into, slamming the door shut with a bang. I groped in the darkness and felt a wooden plank. Taking time only to throw the board at the door, I hurled myself into the tunnel, tripping over the dead bodies of soldiers. My stomach jumped into my throat every time I slipped in a puddle of liquid. Blood?
“Rowan!” I called into the darkness. I could hear fighting ahead. My fingertips touched solid stone wall on either side of me, guiding my feet. The tunnel swerved and the darkness was lifted somewhat.
A breeze brushed past my face. I walked on, stumbling in the semi-darkness. But then the darkness pressed down on me again, and clammy air filled my mouth and nostrils. I must have missed an exit.
–Copyright 2008 through 2011 by Haniya
Haniya, we’ve downloaded your story and can’t wait to read it! We’ll probably wait until school begins, so it might be a few weeks before we read it and let you know what we think about it. We’re excited for you!
Yay! I hope you enjoy it.
Haniya
I saved your document and can’t wait to begin reading it. I presume that saving it now replaced the original one that was saved. The computer didn’t ask me about the “title” so I presume it overwrote it. Do you think? We can check when YOU GET HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE, TATA
I’m not sure. I might have named the .doc differently… We’ll see.
We’re loading up the truck RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
Haniya